Wind Scar

I hope I made it look like Edo/Aster looking at the sky after the rain (BTW, he's holding an umbrella in that hand, and checking the rain with the other).

What I don't like: He looks broken, which is very uncharacteristic. More like Noa. And his head's too large. And the lines are too thin. And it's sloppy.

What I do like: I experimented with the linework and background to make it look as Yuduru Togakasa-like as possible, well it worked! A little. Next time I'm going to try Sai (as soon as I find the download link that is).